From: Kevin H. <hu...@ea...> - 2008-06-23 16:06:33
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Seph, Fantastic work! Indeed, I like this much better. Well done. Could include it as far as I'm concerned. That said, the perfectionist in me has some notes. Notes: The brushed metal looks stands out more now. Good job. What is that gray line at the top of the bottom third of the icon? Is that intentional? It almost looks like a scratch in metal. I'm not sure if I like or dislike it (ambivalent, perhaps?), but I point it out. Suggest still a larger icon font. I think the jE should fill more of the space. I like the dark outer ring fading to light inner circle on the background. That works well, and even more effectively puts the jE in the foreground of my attention. Even further, the shadow below the jE is a nice touch. Still suggest lower casing "Programmer's Text Editor". As jEdit is the product, I think the relative size of the byline and name should be reversed. That is, the text "jEdit" should be larger than the text "programmer's text editor" in my opinion. My 0.02 cents of $CURRENCY, Kevin At 9:01a -0400 on Mon, 23 Jun 2008, Dale Anson wrote: > +1 > Matthieu Casanova wrote: >> I like the second suggestion (this one >> http://mijav.dk/img/jedit/splashscreen_2.png) very much >> Thanks for you work >> On Mon, Jun 23, 2008 at 2:15 PM, Seph M. Soliman <se...@mi...> wrote: >>> I've updated the splash screen and taken Kevin's comments into regard >>> (the name was added and the color gradient on the logo is now more >>> consistent with the Tango icon guidelines): >>> To see them all in comparison: >>> http://mijav.dk/node/27 |