[Arianne-bugs] [ arianne-Bugs-3165812 ] [Stendhal] change order of parts in death message

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Bugs item #3165812, was opened at 2011-01-26 10:46
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Status: Open
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Priority: 5
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Submitted By: Katie Russell (kymara)
Assigned to: Nobody/Anonymous (nobody)
Summary: [Stendhal] change order of parts in death message

Initial Comment:
I think there's an extra 'of' in these that isn't needed:
[10:40] You died in the center region of inside a building in kirdneh.

[10:42] You died in the south west region of north of semos plains.


[10:40] You died in the north east region of semos city.

- this one is okay

I will try to think of how to word these! perhaps the zone first - thats the important part - the major place to go? Also region sounds very big (i.e. all of ados ia  region) - so maybe 'part' for the small bit? or area?

[10:40] You died inside a building in kirdneh in the central part. 
[10:42] You died in the north of semos plains in the south west part.
[10:40] You died in semos city in the north east part.

(And I made a separate bug report about capitalisation)





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