Re: OK, here's the updated "version" splash text

[Petr M. <mi...@ph...>]

Well, I have some comments too:

> >        G N U P L O T
> >        Version 4.0 patchlevel 0
> >        last modified Wed Apr 14 14:46:24 CEST 2004
> >        System: Linux 2.4.20-4GB-athlon
> >
> >        Copyright (C) 1986 - 1993, 1998, 2004
> >        Thomas Williams, Colin Kelley and many others
> >
> >        This is gnuplot version 4.0.  Please refer to the documentation
> >        for command syntax changes. The old syntax will be accepted throughout
> >        the 4.0 series, but all save files use the new syntax.

please use always either single space like ". " or double space ".  ".

> >        Type `help` to access the on-line reference manual

I would like more to see "." at the end of this sentence.

> >        The gnuplot FAQ is available from
> >                http://www.gnuplot.info/faq/

What about:

	   See also the gnuplot FAQ available from

as all the surrounding sentences start with a verb too?


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Now, I've updated the head of NEWS. Please proofread.

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