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Date:     2011-06-03 10:39:09 +0200 (Fri, 03 Jun 2011)
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 An educational experience of teaching computer architecture topics
 using a project-based learning is described and evaluated
 in~\cite{Martinez-Mones2005}. The main idea is using a collaborative approch
-where students are assigned to different subprojects but have to
-exchange some aquired knowledge in order to complete their tasks.
+where students are assigned to different subprojects but still have to
+exchange some acquired knowledge in order to complete their tasks.
 Authors of~\cite{Verginis2011} present a web-based environment to
 support the learning process in  introductory conputer science course
 using a customizable e-learning approach.
 
 %tool oriented
-As regards tools-based approaches, topics of computer architecture are
+As regards tools-based approaches, computer architecture topics are
 addressed at different levels of abstraction and granularity. The
 work~\cite{Djordjevic2005} introduces an educational computer system
 specifically designed to help teaching architecture topics from the
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
 architecture course.  The work in~\cite{Quislant2008} shows how  an
 educational framework has been used in introductory courses on
 Computer Architecture and Engineering  to teach some topics related to
-the tuning of cache parameters related to performance and energy
+the tuning of cache parameters with the aim of optimizing performance and energy
 consumption.  In~\cite{Sahuquillo2007} authors present a pedagogical
 tool for dealing with code-based exercises expressely focused on cache
 memory related topics.