Re: [Salix-main] New Startup Guide

[Dave C. <eld...@gm...>]

On 02/18/2014 11:39 AM, George Vlahavas wrote:
> We would appreciate anyone taking a second look and commenting on it. It 
> hasn't gone through any proof reading at all yet, so there might be some 
> things that are off.
>
As I read it, I'll submit my observations in small bunches:

1) About this manual -> "The latest version of this document is
available from our website" -> the link takes one to the Salix home
page, shouldn't it take one directly to the Startup Guide?

2) 2.2.1 Before starting -> "Recommended running specification (Intel
PIII 1 GHz, 512 Mb RAM, 8Gb HD space, or equivalent," -> This is the
<recommeded> specification or <minimum> recommeded specification?
Semantics maybe, but it sounds like Salix is "recommending" old hardware.

And wouldn't this be a good spot for a note on non-PAE+Salix?

3) Shouldn't "2.5 Partition management with cfdisk" be after 2.2.2
Partition Management (or part of it) and before "2.3 Installing from a
Salix Installation CD (all partitioning instructions before installing
instructions)?