Re: Reducing out-of-date instructions proliferation

[Aaron A. <aa...@ar...>]

> >   john, the instructions there are fine - but, the problem is clarity.
> >   right now, its a mangle of text (which, some think are fine), but
> >   it is obvious, that newbies dont.
> 
> It would be *SO* NICE if you could phrase this sort of thing a little
> more kindly.  Don't you think the following has a different sound,
> particularly when you are speaking to the author of the text in question?
> 
> 	Right now it's obvious that some newbies find the instructions
> 	to be just a tangle of text.  I have some ideas for some
> 	rearrangements that would untangle it for them...

  the text there worked for me :) so, i aint criticizing it :P

> On 15 November 2001 [1] you wrote:
> > ok John, i'll make a note to remember to capitalize your name.
> 
> What happened?

  i changed to my laptop.

  my desktop is only capable of remembering to capitalize your name :)

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