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Update of /cvsroot/super-tux/htdocs In directory sc8-pr-cvs1.sourceforge.net:/tmp/cvs-serv14934 Modified Files: authors.xml contact.xml download.xml index.xml screenshots.xml welcome.xml Log Message: - some grammar fixes Index: index.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvsroot/super-tux/htdocs/index.xml,v retrieving revision 1.3 retrieving revision 1.4 diff -u -d -r1.3 -r1.4 --- index.xml 2 May 2004 21:36:11 -0000 1.3 +++ index.xml 11 May 2004 19:17:04 -0000 1.4 @@ -3,11 +3,11 @@ <section title="What is SuperTux?"> <p> SuperTux is a classic 2D jump'n run sidescroller game in a - similar style like the original SuperMario games. The + style similar to the original SuperMario games. The 'Milestone1' release of SuperTux features 9 enemies, 26 playable levels, software and OpenGL rendering modes, configurable joystick and keyboard input, new music and completly redone - graphics. Together with a little story we hope to provide a good + graphics. Together with a little story, we hope to provide a good gaming experince with this first Milestone release. </p> @@ -16,14 +16,14 @@ </p> <ul> <li><a href="milestone1/index.html">The Milestone1 webpage</a>, - ie. the one that contains all the information for the next - version (the one created for GotM)</li> + contains all the information for the next version (the one + created for GotM)</li> <li><a href="development/index.html">The generic Development - webpage</a>, ie the one that contains information and ideas - for future development, its mainly only here for - brainstorming, its not meant to be implemented</li> + webpage</a>, contains information and ideas for future development, + its mainly only here for brainstorming, it'ss not necessarily meant + to be implemented</li> </ul> </section> -</page> \ No newline at end of file +</page> Index: screenshots.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvsroot/super-tux/htdocs/screenshots.xml,v retrieving revision 1.5 retrieving revision 1.6 diff -u -d -r1.5 -r1.6 --- screenshots.xml 11 May 2004 12:20:26 -0000 1.5 +++ screenshots.xml 11 May 2004 19:17:04 -0000 1.6 @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ <subsection title="SuperTux 0.1.1"> <p> This version basically features the built-in editor that - was took off from the previous release (0.1.0), new hand-written fonts + was removed from the previous release (0.1.0), new hand-written fonts and a few bug fixes. </p> @@ -22,9 +22,10 @@ <subsection title="SuperTux Milestone1 aka 0.1.0"> <p> Milestone1 is in huge parts the result of the GotM event on - happypenguin.org, it contains completly new graphics and lots - of new levels and also a story and a worldmap. Screenshots - below should give you an impression of the game. + <a href="http://happypenguin.org">happypenguin.org</a>, + it contains completly new graphics, lots of new levels, + a story and a worldmap. Screenshots below should give you an + impression of the game. </p> <center> @@ -38,7 +39,7 @@ <subsubsection title="Flexlay"> <p> Flexlay is the editor that was used to build most of the - levels in Milestone1 and the Worldmap. It provides a few + levels and the Worldmap in Milestone1. It provides a few more features than the build in one (zoom, minimap, worldmap support), but requires a few more dependencies and OpenGL on the other side. Index: contact.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvsroot/super-tux/htdocs/contact.xml,v retrieving revision 1.1 retrieving revision 1.2 diff -u -d -r1.1 -r1.2 --- contact.xml 2 May 2004 21:36:11 -0000 1.1 +++ contact.xml 11 May 2004 19:17:04 -0000 1.2 @@ -2,8 +2,8 @@ <page title="SuperTux"> <section title="Contact"> <p> - Development is mainly coordinated via IRC and the mailing lists, - be sure to visit both once in a while or you might miss critical + Development is mainly coordinated via IRC and the mailing list. + Be sure to visit both once in a while or you might miss critical stuff. </p> @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ <dl> <dt><a href="mailto:sup...@li...">sup...@li...</a> - - List for comments critics and everything development + - List for comments, criticisms and everything development related</dt> <dd><a href="http://sourceforge.net/mailarchive/forum.php?forum_id=36963">Archive</a></dd> @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ <dl> <dt><a href="mailto:sup...@li...">sup...@li...</a> - - List for commits to CVS, mainly interesting for people working directly with the source</dt> + - List for commits to CVS, mainly useful for people working directly with the source</dt> <dd><a href="http://sourceforge.net/mailarchive/forum.php?forum_id=39400">Archive</a></dd> <dd><a href="http://lists.sourceforge.net/mailman/listinfo/super-tux-commit">Subscribe/Unsubscribe</a></dd> @@ -35,4 +35,4 @@ </p> </subsection> </section> -</page> \ No newline at end of file +</page> Index: authors.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvsroot/super-tux/htdocs/authors.xml,v retrieving revision 1.2 retrieving revision 1.3 diff -u -d -r1.2 -r1.3 --- authors.xml 29 Apr 2004 12:05:12 -0000 1.2 +++ authors.xml 11 May 2004 19:17:04 -0000 1.3 @@ -2,8 +2,8 @@ <page title="SuperTux"> <section title="Authors"> <p> - Here goes the list of the people behind this project: - (as a note, noone earns money by making this game, our only incentivation is the amusement of doing it.) + Here is list of the people behind this project: + (as a note, no one earns money by making this game, our only incentive is the amusement of doing it.) </p> <b>Project leader</b><br/> @@ -33,10 +33,10 @@ <br/> <b>Contrib Programming</b><br/> <br/> - Ryan Flegel<br/> - xxd...@ho... / http://digitalhell.cjb.net/~ryan/<br/> + Ryan (sik0fewl) Flegel<br/> + xxd...@ho...<br/> <br/> - Duong-Khang NGUYEN<br/> + Duong-Khang (neoneurone) NGUYEN<br/> neo...@us...<br/> <br/> <b>Graphics</b><br/> Index: download.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvsroot/super-tux/htdocs/download.xml,v retrieving revision 1.9 retrieving revision 1.10 diff -u -d -r1.9 -r1.10 --- download.xml 11 May 2004 12:20:26 -0000 1.9 +++ download.xml 11 May 2004 19:17:04 -0000 1.10 @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ <subsection title="Older versions"> <ul> - <li>If you feel like being nostalgic, check out our <a href="https://sourceforge.net/project/showfiles.php?group_id=69183">old stuff</a></li> + <li>If you feel like being nostalgic, check out our <a href="https://sourceforge.net/project/showfiles.php?group_id=69183">older versions</a></li> </ul> </subsection> @@ -41,20 +41,17 @@ <section title="Flexlay Editor Download"> <p> - There exist two leveleditors for SuperTux, the build in one - that comes with SuperTux and is available via the InGame Menu - (not present in 0.1.0, but will be included again in 0.1.1) - and the external one, which is known as Flexlay. Flexlay is a - seperate project with no webpage yet, however its available - via Subversion from: - </p> - <p> - <tt>svn co "svn://clanlib.org/Games/Windstille/trunk/flexlay/</tt> + There exist two level editors for SuperTux, the built-in one + that comes with SuperTux and is available via the in-game menu + (available in 0.1.1 and later) and the external one, which is known + as <a href="http://pingus.seul.org/~grumbel/flexlay/">Flexlay.</a> + Flexlay is a seperate project that aims to provide level editing + capabilities for multiple games. </p> <p> It needs <a href="http://www.clanlib.org">ClanLib-0.7-CVS</a> - and Guile to compile. + and <a href="http://www.gnu.org/software/guile/guile.html">Guile</a> to compile. </p> </section> </page> Index: welcome.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvsroot/super-tux/htdocs/welcome.xml,v retrieving revision 1.3 retrieving revision 1.4 diff -u -d -r1.3 -r1.4 --- welcome.xml 2 May 2004 21:36:11 -0000 1.3 +++ welcome.xml 11 May 2004 19:17:04 -0000 1.4 @@ -3,14 +3,12 @@ <section title="What is SuperTux?"> <p> SuperTux is a classic 2D jump'n run sidescroller game in a - similar style like the original SuperMario games. The new - <em>Milestone 1</em> release of SuperTux features 9 enemies, 26 - playable levels, a worldmap that allows you to travel from one - level to the next, software and OpenGL rendering modes, - configurable joystick and keyboard input, new music and - completly redone graphics. Together with a little story we hope - to provide a reasonablly good gaming experince with this first - Milestone release for the player. + style similar to the original SuperMario games. The + <em>Milestone1</em> release of SuperTux features 9 enemies, 26 playable + levels, software and OpenGL rendering modes, configurable + joystick and keyboard input, new music and completly redone + graphics. Together with a little story, we hope to provide a good + gaming experince with this first Milestone release. </p> <p> @@ -40,4 +38,4 @@ </p> </section> -</page> \ No newline at end of file +</page> |