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From: Francois B. <fb...@us...> - 2004-02-04 16:17:22
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Hi ! I did a proofread of the first few chapters. I did introduction, background and beans. I have attached a patch with corrections for the beans.xml file. Accept or reject as you see fit :) There are a few misspellings corrections, some rewordings, and a correction to the destroy method example. I have not reviewed the "BeanFactory structure and implementations" (#beans-factoryimpl) section. The comment says it needs a rewrite, so I did not spend time on it. Log message follows: [[[ * docs/reference/src/beans.xml: Patch by Francois Beausoleil (fb...@us...). Corrects spelling mistakes, rewords some sentences, and corrects the destroy method example. The example was copied from the init example, and it defined the destroy method as init, clearly a cut'n'paste error. Also changed the destroy method name to something that didn't look like we implement DisposableBean. ]]] I will go on with the other chapters as time permits. Sorry for the attachment instead of inlining the patch, but my mailer *will* wrap long lines, and the beans.xml file has long lines, so the patch would have been "dead-on-arrival". I preferred to avoid that. I used the cvs unified diff format, created on Windows. Bye ! Fran=E7ois Beausoleil Developer of Java Gui Builder http://jgb.sourceforge.net/ |