#21 Some mistakes I have noticed

[Anonymous]

Great job translating. Now down to business...

before you fight the fedal cats outside the masion,
Serge says "two shimmering eyes catch my attention"
catch should be catches.

After that battle Kid says "Well that was some workout."
There should be a comma after "Well"

After this, when you ask Magil how he is,
there should be a comma between "face" and "he"

When in battle with the goblins, random not the
Gobblers, Kid shouts at one time "Serge, Duck!"
Duck should be duck.

In Scenario 3, when Kids casts the Phatom Break, the
lines goes, "The pale shimmering spreads". "light" has
been forgotten.

Finally, also Scenario 3, if you cause Serge to be killed,
Kid will say "But if we a clone for ya." the word "make"
has been left out.

There are other ones, however I have included the
pictures in the zip. I hope this will be of help.

[Nobody/Anonymous]

Pictures of Some Grammerical and Spelling errors