[Poop-group] Re: RFC - my Lightning Talk for OSCON 2005

[Darren D. <darren@DarrenDuncan.net>]

Following my email from yesterday,

I have gotten a second wind and now released the second major draft 
of my Lightning Talk, at 
http://darrenduncan.net/OSCON/OSCON2005LightningTalk.txt .

Large changes were made so that it reads better is shorter, and is 
easier to understand, while still saying everything important.  Many 
parts were reordered and summarized.  I didn't get any feedback on it 
yet, but no worries.

This new version clocks in at a few seconds over 5 minutes on my last 
reading, so I'll want to shave it some more, but the hard work is 
done.

I still would appreciate any feedback should you find any parts of 
the talk confusing or incorrect.  Likewise, any further edit 
suggestions for length.  Likewise, anything I should say but didn't, 
or didn't but should.

I can take suggestions any time through the next week, though earlier 
is better.

Also, despite my previous statement, I may try to have some visuals 
after all, rather than this being all spoken.

Thank you. -- Darren Duncan