Hi Graham,
I just glimpsed over your slides and found some typos:
A typo on slide 13, second item in the enumeration: it should be Equipment
instead of Equiptment.
And on slide 28 you speak of a method called get_value but in the code a
mathod get is used ... hmmmm, something wrong in the state of Denmark ;-) ?
On slide 41 there's a double 'the' on the third topic.
A small typo on slide 55: end of 2nd topic says 'in this fields', should be
singular.
A small typo on slide 56: end of 3rd subtopic: says 'for then given error',
should be 'for the ...'.
Typo on slide 57, first topic: 'not a simple as' should be 'not as simple
as'.
Typo on slide 57, 2nd topic, 5th subtopic: 'and traing spaces' should be
'and trailing spaces'
That's all I have found so far (some slides are not filled with content yet,
as you have mentioned).
Apart from the typos, I think these are good slides. And a lot of them, too
:-). Wow, 62 slides! How long is your course supposed to be?
Hope this helps.
Keep up the good work,
Daniel.
----- Original Message -----
From: Graham Barr <gb...@po...>
To: LDAP Mailing List <per...@li...>
Sent: Monday, May 14, 2001 12:21 PM
Subject: The Perl Conference
> As many already know I will be giving a tutorial on Net::LDAP at the perl
> conference this year.
>
> However here is your chnace at a sneak preview and hopefully give me
> some feednack. The slides I have done so far are at
>
> http://monty.mutatus.co.uk/~gbarr/TPC/img0.htm
>
> I am still writing the slides, but I am running out of time fast.
>
> Any feeback is most welcome.
>
> After the conference I will place the complete set of slides on the
perl-ldap
> website
>
> Graham.
>
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