From: Daniel B. <da...@un...> - 2001-05-15 18:04:28
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Hi Graham, I just glimpsed over your slides and found some typos: A typo on slide 13, second item in the enumeration: it should be Equipment instead of Equiptment. And on slide 28 you speak of a method called get_value but in the code a mathod get is used ... hmmmm, something wrong in the state of Denmark ;-) ? On slide 41 there's a double 'the' on the third topic. A small typo on slide 55: end of 2nd topic says 'in this fields', should be singular. A small typo on slide 56: end of 3rd subtopic: says 'for then given error', should be 'for the ...'. Typo on slide 57, first topic: 'not a simple as' should be 'not as simple as'. Typo on slide 57, 2nd topic, 5th subtopic: 'and traing spaces' should be 'and trailing spaces' That's all I have found so far (some slides are not filled with content yet, as you have mentioned). Apart from the typos, I think these are good slides. And a lot of them, too :-). Wow, 62 slides! How long is your course supposed to be? Hope this helps. Keep up the good work, Daniel. ----- Original Message ----- From: Graham Barr <gb...@po...> To: LDAP Mailing List <per...@li...> Sent: Monday, May 14, 2001 12:21 PM Subject: The Perl Conference > As many already know I will be giving a tutorial on Net::LDAP at the perl > conference this year. > > However here is your chnace at a sneak preview and hopefully give me > some feednack. The slides I have done so far are at > > http://monty.mutatus.co.uk/~gbarr/TPC/img0.htm > > I am still writing the slides, but I am running out of time fast. > > Any feeback is most welcome. > > After the conference I will place the complete set of slides on the perl-ldap > website > > Graham. > |