Re: [Firebird-docs] Russian translations - some remarks

[Pavel M. <dev...@ls...>]

Hello Paul,

PV>   Great Work! And the PDFs look very good too.
Thank you.

PV> Now, some other things:
PV> - In the Perekhod/Migration and the nbackup guide, some of the lines
PV>   in the preformatted sections are too long, and protrude way into
PV>   the right margin. Not disastrous, but it's nicer if you split those
PV>   lines in the DocBook source. Whenever there's a new build of the
PV>   PDFs, these sections will come out nicer-looking.
OK, I'll fix it soon.

PV> - Some <title>s are so long that the top and bottom "you are here"
PV>   lines in the HTML version wrap (at least at 1024 pixels they do). No
PV>   problem from a functional POV, but again, it's nicer if they don't.
PV>   You can fix this by adding a <titleabbrev> element directly after
PV>   such a long <title>. The titleabbrev will be used: a) in the top and
PV>   bottom lines in the HTML; b) In the PDF bookmarks on the left.
Yes, you mentioned about it earlier. And I translate keeping that in
my mind. But there are titles, for which I can't select another
translation; for which I can, I do (in titleabbrev).

And "Dokumentachiya po bazam dannykh Firebird" - it was there
initially, so I didn't bother about it. I'll change it to something
shorter.

PV> - As translator, you should add a Contributor's section to the License
PV>   Notice in the nbackup guide. You can do that in Russian, English, or
PV>   both. For an example, see how Grigoriy did it in the Russian QSG.
OK.

PV> Neither of these points is very urgent, so no problem if you don't
PV> want to build and upload everything again. But it may be good to at
PV> least do it in the source and commit it. Then at the next upgrade it
PV> will automatically appear in the output.
I'll try to fix ASAP.


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Best regards,
Pavel Menshchikov
http://www.ls-software.com