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From: Fabricio A. <fab...@in...> - 2005-03-10 01:39:44
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On Tue, 1 Mar 2005 18:18:31 +0100 (MET), Paul Vinkenoog wrote:
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>- Section "Building the HTML and PDF docs":
> Changed some "\" to "/" (also matter of taste; you decide).
> Text in Note replaced by itemizedlist with 2 items.
> Last sentence ("If you want to write...") changed.
Change the link from docwritehowto to docwritinghowto. The link is
pointing to a non-existant entity. It's on last sentence.
>
>- Appendix A: Document History added.
>
>- Appendix B: License notice added.
> You should add a Contributor's Section to the license notice to
> claim and date your translation. More about this in the (renewed)
> Firebird Docwriting Guide.
>
>
>(4)
>In docwriting-howto.xml:
>
>- <title> changed
>- <edition> added
>
>- Section "Purpose of this Howto":
> "Howto" --> "guide" in section title and text.
>
>- Section "Assumed knowledge":
> "Howto" --> "guide"
>
>- Section "Topics discussed in this Howto":
> "Howto" --> "guide" in section title and text.
> Text/listitems changed in *last two* itemizedlists.
>
>- Section "Picking a subject":
> 4th listitem: "...very well" --> "...a lot about" (taste again).
>
>- Section "DocBook XML - an introduction":
> The comment "To be added: a note for people..." has been
> replaced with a <note>.
>
>- Section "Tags and attributes":
> 2nd para past the <table>: "valid XML" --> "well-formed XML", and
> an explanation added.
>
>- Section "Special characters and Entities":
> "...although that's not necessary" --> "...but you don't have to"
> (taste).
> Last word before "Elements" header: "Howto" --> "guide".
>
>- Section "A DocBook XML primer":
> "a DocBook document should be" --> "a valid DocBook document is".
>
>- Section "Benefits of DocBook XML":
> Removed one listitem and reworked the text of the others.
>
>- Section "DocBook XML authoring tools":
> 4th para: "Howto" -> "guide".
>
>- Section "Creating the document":
> Changed a lot of "<element>'s" plurals to "<element>s" (dropped
> the apostrophe). Of course it depends on the rules of *your*
> language if you follow this (maybe you never included them in the
> first place...).
>
>- Section "Elements we use frequently":
> In the <tip>: "Howto" -> "guide".
>
>- Section "Hierarchical elements":
> In the <note>: "Howto" -> "guide".
>
> Also, in this *and* the following sections on elements, I changed
> a lot of <sgmltag class="starttag"> to <sgmltag class="element">.
> The latter is more correct, but the effect is that the element name
> is now shown as e.g. just "book" instead of "<book>". You decide.
>
> In the itemizedlist after the long programlisting, just before the
> "Lists" subsection header, an extra sentence has been added to the
> 3rd listitem.
>
>- Section "Lists":
> First line changed.
> Programlisting itemizedlist: spacing="compact" added.
> Itemizedlist: Para added about spacing attribute.
> Orderedlist: Almost everything changed.
> New varlistentry: procedure (with the example listitems that were
> previously in the orderedlist example).
> Variablelist: Changed paras before and after the programlisting.
>
>- Section "Links":
> Link: Changed "-" to ";" in first para. Wow!
> Link: Changed first sentence after programlisting, dropped all
> the "advanced" stuff, and added a <blockquote>, a <caution> and a
> <note> instead.
> Xref: entirely deleted.
> Ulink: changed programlisting + following para; added blockquote.
> Email: first para: line -> piece; para after programlisting changed
> into para + blockquote; changed last words of <warning>.
> Anchor: changed last para.
>
>- Section "Program listings, screens, literal layout, and examples":
> Programlisting: last line of first para: "Howto" --> "guide", and
> replaced "." with ":". Added example programlisting + <important>.
> Literallayout: "Howto" --> "guide" in the <note> at the end.
>
>- Section "Tables":
> One-but-last paragraph, shortly before Admonitions header: sentence
> "(This is...)" removed.
>
>- Section "Various inline elements":
> filename - command - application - envar:
> para "The output reads:..." split into para + blockquote.
> para "This is rendered as:..." split into para + blockquote.
> superscript - subscript: changed first line.
> sgmltag: first para: "Howto" --> "guide".
> One-but-last para, shortly before "To wrap up the elements" header:
> removed "of course".
>
>- Section "To wrap up the elements":
> Last few words: "Howto" --> "guide".
>
>- Section "Style":
> Last listitem: "Or don't you think so???" --> "Don't you agree???"
>
>- Section "Copyrights of others":
> Title changed to "Respecting others' copyrights".
> First para (towards the end): "illegal" now wrapped in <emphasis>.
>
>- Section "Your copyright":
> Title changed to "Your copyright and the PDL".
> Section text almost completely replaced, and 4 subsections added
> (lots and lots of text).
>
>- Section "Using PostgreSQL docs":
> Para "The most recent PostgreSQL license..." and subsequent ulink
> (both link text and url attribute!) changed.
>
>- Appendix A: Document History added.
>
>- Appendix B: License notice added.
> You should add a Contributors Section to the license notice to
> claim and date your translation.
>
>
>Good luck!
>
>More to come (but probably not today).
>
>
>Greetings,
>Paul Vinkenoog
>
>
>
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