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Enlightenment CVS committal Author : cpk Project : web Module : e Dir : web/e/data Modified Files: components.html docs.html download.html mail.html main.html news.html source.html Log Message: Ben, your contributions really are appreciated, but I'd like to ask you to watch the language a bit and keep it "serious" (and maybe also to use a spellchecker :) In particular, please stay reasonable with statements about Enlightenment, okay? =================================================================== RCS file: /cvsroot/enlightenment/web/e/data/components.html,v retrieving revision 1.3 retrieving revision 1.4 diff -u -3 -r1.3 -r1.4 --- components.html 2001/07/01 05:35:47 1.3 +++ components.html 2001/07/02 12:00:44 1.4 @@ -2,14 +2,11 @@ @start@ <p class="contenttitle">Components (Subsystems of Enlightenment)</p> <p> -As a result of meeting requests from users, Enlightenment over time has done -some nasty hacks, but now for the development of version 0.17.0, we have -moved a lot of the design and core code into various subsystems than -generalize some back end and let us not only use it in Enlightenment itself, -but make this work available to everyone to use as they want. The result is -various lower level libraries that do lots of useful stuff for you and -provide a consistant api to them. Also daemons and helper programs have been -written too to make life easier. +During development of version 0.17.0, many of the core components +have been modulaized into various subsystems, which helps making the +work done available to everyone to use as they want. The result is a +number of various lower level utility libraries, plus daemons and helper +programs. </p> <p class="contenttitle"><img alt="" src="img/ruler.gif"></p> <p> =================================================================== RCS file: /cvsroot/enlightenment/web/e/data/docs.html,v retrieving revision 1.9 retrieving revision 1.10 diff -u -3 -r1.9 -r1.10 --- docs.html 2001/07/02 09:56:24 1.9 +++ docs.html 2001/07/02 12:00:44 1.10 @@ -2,9 +2,10 @@ @start@ <p class="contenttitle">Documentation</p> -<p>The Enlightenment Project covers far more than simple window management, but encompasses -all of our development tools as well. Whether user, developer, or just someone looking for -some good bathroom material should find something of interestest below.</p> +<p>The Enlightenment Project covers more than simple window management. +Whether you're a user, developer, or just someone looking for +some good bathroom material, if you are in need of answers, +you should find something of interestest below.</p> <!---------------------------- E DR16 DOCS (User Interface) --------------------> <p align="center"><b>Enlightenment Window Manager DR16.x</b></p> @@ -23,31 +24,32 @@ @:news_title@ <a href="pdf/evas.pdf">Evas Programmers Guide</a>: By <a href="mailto:raster@@rasterman.com">Rasterman</a> <a href="pdf/evas.pdf">[PDF]</a> <a href="evas.html">[HTML](Introduction only)</a> @:news_body@ -This is a comprehensive document writen by the coder to explain everything you could want -to know about the Evas canvas library. Includes excellent introduction, good discusion, -complete API reference, including 5 full examples and numberous rendering samples for illustration. +This is a comprehensive document written by the lead developer to explain everything you want +to know about the Evas canvas library. Includes excellent introduction, good discussion, +complete API reference, including five complete programming examples and numberous rendering +samples for illustration. @:news_end@ @:news_title@ <a href="imlib.html">Imlib Programmers Guide</a>: By <a href="mailto:raster@@rasterman.com">Rasterman</a> <a href="imlib.html">[HTML]</a> @:news_body@ A brief guide detailing Imlib (unofficially known as Imlib 1). You'll find several examples, using both Xlib and GTK+, -a full introduction and feature list, rendering examples and topped off with a complete API reference. This servers +a full introduction and feature list, rendering examples and topped off with a complete API reference. This serves as the essential reference for the original Imlib. @:news_end@ @:news_title@ <a href="imlib2.html">Imlib2 Programmers Guide</a>: By <a href="mailto:raster@@rasterman.com">Rasterman</a> <a href="imlib2.html">[HTML]</a> @:news_body@ -A brief guide detailing Imlib2 (note: not Imlib v2, but the successor to Imlib). Included are 2 full examples -(simple and advanced), an overview of how Imlib2 works and thinks, -followed by a complete API reference. If you work with images this doc should be on your nightstand. +A brief guide detailing Imlib2 (note: not Imlib v2, but the successor to Imlib). Included are 2 full +programming examples (simple and advanced), an overview of how Imlib2 works and thinks, +followed by a complete API reference. If you work with images this document should be on your nightstand. @:news_end@ @:news_title@ <a href="pdf/efsd-manual.pdf">The EFSD Programming Manual</a>: By <a href="mailto:cK@@whoop.org">Christian Kreibich</a> <a href="/pdf/efsd-manual.pdf">[PDF]</a> (HTML Coming Soon) @:news_body@ -EFSD stands to be one of the most drawing elements of DR17, bringing the filesystem seamlessly to the desktop, in true Enlightenment style. This manual contains a full API reference, introduction and other vital pieces of information to put the power of EFS in your hands. <i>Please be aware that this document is not yet complete, and do not pester the author who is busy both working on EFSD and trying to remain a human being at the same time.</i> +EFSD stands to be one of the most drawing elements of DR17, bringing the filesystem seamlessly to the desktop. This manual contains a full API reference, introduction and other vital pieces of information to put the power of EFSD in your hands. <i>Please be aware that this document is not yet complete, and do not pester the author who is busy both working on EFSD and trying to remain a human being at the same time.</i> @:news_end@ =================================================================== RCS file: /cvsroot/enlightenment/web/e/data/download.html,v retrieving revision 1.14 retrieving revision 1.15 diff -u -3 -r1.14 -r1.15 --- download.html 2001/06/21 00:08:23 1.14 +++ download.html 2001/07/02 12:00:44 1.15 @@ -3,8 +3,9 @@ <p class="contenttitle">Download Page</p> <p> -Welcome. You're quickly on your way to getting started with Enlightenment DR0.16.5. This release has been considered stable -since October 27th, 2000. Before you get E, review the following list of required libraries and applications:<br> +The Enlightenment DR0.16.5 release has been considered stable +since October 27th, 2000. Before downloading, review the following +list of required libraries and applications:<br> </p> <br> @@ -115,10 +116,10 @@ <p><img alt="" src="img/ruler.gif"></p> <p> -Enlightenment is probably considered the most visually appealing window -manager out there. One way it does this is with "themes", which it includes a -couple of with it's regular packages. If you'd like to try different ones out, -one of the best sites for finding new ones is <a href="http://e.themes.org"> e.themes.org.</a> +Enlightenment is one of the most visually configurable window +managers available. This is done using themes, a number of which +are included in the standard package. If you'd like to try different ones, +the best site for finding new ones is <a href="http://e.themes.org">e.themes.org.</a> </p> =================================================================== RCS file: /cvsroot/enlightenment/web/e/data/mail.html,v retrieving revision 1.11 retrieving revision 1.12 diff -u -3 -r1.11 -r1.12 --- mail.html 2001/07/02 10:51:45 1.11 +++ mail.html 2001/07/02 12:00:44 1.12 @@ -2,9 +2,10 @@ @start@ <p class="contenttitle">Mailing Lists and Archives</p> <p> -The Enlightenment Project has several mailing lists to aid you. In the following table is a list of the diffrent lists -including a link to the list archives. To add, remove or otherwise modify a subscription to these lists simply click -on the list name. +The Enlightenment Project has several mailing lists to aid you. The +following table contains a summary, including links to the list archives. +To add, remove or otherwise modify a subscription to these lists, +simply click on the list name. </p> <table border="0"> =================================================================== RCS file: /cvsroot/enlightenment/web/e/data/main.html,v retrieving revision 1.10 retrieving revision 1.11 diff -u -3 -r1.10 -r1.11 --- main.html 2001/07/01 23:27:13 1.10 +++ main.html 2001/07/02 12:00:44 1.11 @@ -3,33 +3,27 @@ <p class="contenttitle">Welcome to the Enlightenment Project!</p> -<p>For the End User Enlightenment is a Window Manager for the +<p>Enlightenment is a Window Manager for the <a href="http://www.x.org/">X Window System</a>, traditionally used in -Unix environments. But for the Developer Enlightenment means alot more. -The developers behind Enlightenment are some of the brightest and most innovative -in the world of <a href="http://www.opensource.org/">Open</a> <a href="http://www.gnu.org">Source</a> -development. While the Window Manager is famous for being one of the most powerful -and <b>flexable</b> Window Mangers avalible, so are the tools used to build it. -On this site you'll find information about the Window Manger itself, about -the <a href="evas.html">E Canvas Library (Evas)</a>, the <a href="imlib2.html">Enlightened Imaging -Library (imlib2)</a>, the <a href="efsd.html">Enlightened File System Daemon (EFSD)</a>, and -<a href="components.html">far far more</a>. The project always has and always -shall be a driving force in Open Source desktops in or outside of the Window Manager itself. -(<i><a href="download.html">But you know you wanna use it!</a></i>) +Unix environments. On this site you'll find information about both the current release of Enlightenment +and what's happening regarding the development version, including +the <a href="evas.html">Enlightenment Canvas Library (Evas)</a>, the imaging library<a href="imlib2.html">Imlib2</a>, +the <a href="efsd.html">Enlightenment File System Daemon (EFSD)</a>, and +the other <a href="components.html">components</a> of the Enlightenment desktop shell. +If you want to jump right in, you can download everything you need <a href="download.html">here</a>. - <p><img alt="" src="img/ruler.gif"></p> <p>Currently, for support, you have three options: using irc (preferred; #e on irc.openprojects.net), our <a href="http://sourceforge.net/mail/?group_id=2">mailing lists</a>, or email (use email addresses from the -<a href="team.html">team page</a>, but don't bug raster if you don't need to). +<a href="team.html">team page</a>, but don't bug Raster if you don't need to). Suggestions are welcome.</p> <p><img alt="" src="img/ruler.gif"></p> -<p>Wanna use our new logo? Look <a href="logos.html">here</a>!</p> +<p>Want to use our new logo? Look <a href="logos.html">here</a>!</p> @end@ @bottom@ =================================================================== RCS file: /cvsroot/enlightenment/web/e/data/news.html,v retrieving revision 1.7 retrieving revision 1.8 diff -u -3 -r1.7 -r1.8 --- news.html 2001/07/01 08:57:05 1.7 +++ news.html 2001/07/02 12:00:44 1.8 @@ -9,9 +9,8 @@ resources brought to the pages and continually improving what we have so far. The development crew is plugging away at various projects. cK is moving by leaps and bounds on EFSD and its <a href="docs.html">documentation</a>, -Raster finished the <a href="docs.html">Evas Programmers Guide</a>. All developers should -check out these new docs, lots of goodies in there for ya. -Great things are coming.......... +Raster finished the <a href="docs.html">Evas Programmers Guide</a>. Developers should +check out these new docs, lots of information in there for you. @:news_end@ @:news_title@ =================================================================== RCS file: /cvsroot/enlightenment/web/e/data/source.html,v retrieving revision 1.8 retrieving revision 1.9 diff -u -3 -r1.8 -r1.9 --- source.html 2001/06/24 22:36:38 1.8 +++ source.html 2001/07/02 12:00:44 1.9 @@ -2,8 +2,8 @@ @start@ <p class="contenttitle">The Source</p> -<p>All of Enlightenments developement occurs directly in CVS. You can -pull the code directly from CVS using the following CVS commands: </p> +<p>All of Enlightenments developement occurs in CVS. You can +pull the code directly from CVS using the following commands: </p> <p> <pre> |