Feel free to post comments about the story. The current version is a rough draft.
I think the ending action sequence needs some work (more action!) and the bits involving Morgan need more detail.
I'm not worried about spelling and grammar yet, because I'm just working on the plot line. I always fix spelling and grammar in the last phase of writing, though I will fix errors I see when I re-read sections to remind myself of how they went.
If you would like to refer to this comment somewhere else in this project, copy and paste the following link:
...is available here:
http://deimosproject.sourceforge.net/deimos%20project.rtf
Feel free to post comments about the story. The current version is a rough draft.
I think the ending action sequence needs some work (more action!) and the bits involving Morgan need more detail.
I'm not worried about spelling and grammar yet, because I'm just working on the plot line. I always fix spelling and grammar in the last phase of writing, though I will fix errors I see when I re-read sections to remind myself of how they went.
Sorry about the link in the original posting. It didn't come out right and I have no way to fix it.
Just cut and paste the full link, or just visit the home page and dowload from the link there.