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[crawl-ref-commits] SF.net SVN: crawl-ref: [1183] trunk/crawl-ref/source/monspeak.cc
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From: <dsh...@us...> - 2007-04-02 05:16:28
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Revision: 1183
http://svn.sourceforge.net/crawl-ref/?rev=1183&view=rev
Author: dshaligram
Date: 2007-04-01 22:16:26 -0700 (Sun, 01 Apr 2007)
Log Message:
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Monster dialogue grammar fixes (Jordan).
Modified Paths:
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trunk/crawl-ref/source/monspeak.cc
Modified: trunk/crawl-ref/source/monspeak.cc
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--- trunk/crawl-ref/source/monspeak.cc 2007-04-02 05:09:28 UTC (rev 1182)
+++ trunk/crawl-ref/source/monspeak.cc 2007-04-02 05:16:26 UTC (rev 1183)
@@ -292,7 +292,7 @@
case 17:
strcat(info, " says, \"");
strcat(info, you.your_name);
- strcat(info, ", I'm little bit confused.\"");
+ strcat(info, ", I'm a little confused.\"");
break;
}
}
@@ -339,7 +339,7 @@
strcat(info, " mumbles something.");
break;
case 14:
- strcat(info, " says, \"I'm little bit confused.\"");
+ strcat(info, " says, \"I'm a little confused.\"");
break;
case 15:
strcat(info, " asks, \"Where am I?\"");
@@ -360,7 +360,7 @@
strcat(info, " says, \"Why is everything spinning?\"");
break;
case 21:
- strcat(info, " screams, \"NO! I can't bear up that noise!\"");
+ strcat(info, " screams, \"NO! I can't bear that much noise!\"");
break;
case 22:
strcat(info, " is trying to cover his eyes.");
@@ -675,7 +675,7 @@
strcat(info, " says, \"It's nothing personal...\"");
break;
case 14:
- strcat(info, " says, \"A dead adventurer is good adventurer.\"");
+ strcat(info, " says, \"A dead adventurer is a good adventurer.\"");
break;
case 15:
strcat(info, " says, \"Coming here was your last mistake.\"");
@@ -700,7 +700,7 @@
break;
case 3:
strcat(info,
- " says, \"It's nothing personal but I have to kill you.\"");
+ " says, \"It's nothing personal, but I have to kill you.\"");
break;
case 5:
strcat(info, " says, \"You will never get the Orb, sorry.\"");
@@ -855,12 +855,12 @@
mpr(info, MSGCH_MONSTER_SPELL);
strcpy(info, m_name);
- strcat(info, "'s fingertips starts to glow.");
+ strcat(info, "'s fingertips start to glow.");
msg_type = MSGCH_MONSTER_ENCHANT;
break;
case 16:
- strcat(info, "'s eyes starts to glow.");
+ strcat(info, "'s eyes start to glow.");
msg_type = MSGCH_MONSTER_SPELL;
break;
@@ -948,12 +948,12 @@
simple_monster_message( monster, " casts a spell.",
MSGCH_MONSTER_SPELL );
- strcat(info, "'s eyes starts to glow with a red light. ");
+ strcat(info, "'s eyes start to glow with a red light. ");
msg_type = MSGCH_MONSTER_ENCHANT;
break;
case 10:
- strcat(info, " says, \"Look in to my eyes.\"");
+ strcat(info, " says, \"Look into my eyes.\"");
break;
case 11:
strcat(info, " says, \"I'm your fate.\"");
@@ -1090,7 +1090,7 @@
break;
case 11:
strcat(info,
- " says, \"I know thousand and one way to kill you.\"");
+ " says, \"I know a thousand and one ways to kill you.\"");
break;
case 12:
strcat(info,
@@ -1253,7 +1253,7 @@
strcat(info, " sings a strange song.");
break;
case 14:
- strcat(info, " bursts in tears.");
+ strcat(info, " bursts into tears.");
break;
case 15:
strcat(info, " sucks her thumb.");
@@ -1471,7 +1471,7 @@
break;
case 6:
strcat(info,
- " says, \"Only few hits and it's over.\".");
+ " says, \"Only a few hits and it's over.\".");
break;
case 7:
strcat(info, " says, \"You know, I'm in a hurry.\"");
@@ -1522,7 +1522,7 @@
strcat(info, " screams, \"Blood and destruction!\"");
break;
case 9:
- strcat(info, " says, \"You know, it's honour to die by my hand.\"");
+ strcat(info, " says, \"You know, it's an honour to die by my hand.\"");
break;
case 10:
strcat(info, " shouts, \"Your time has come!\"");
@@ -1555,7 +1555,7 @@
break;
case 4:
strcat(info,
- " says, \"You don't look worth for that money.\"");
+ " says, \"You don't look worth it for that money.\"");
break;
case 5:
strcat(info,
@@ -1618,7 +1618,7 @@
break;
case 5:
strcat(info,
- " says, \"I need new robe. I'll buy it from your money.\"");
+ " says, \"I need a new robe. I'll buy it with your money.\"");
break;
case 6:
strcat(info,
@@ -1706,7 +1706,7 @@
simple_monster_message( monster, " casts a spell",
MSGCH_MONSTER_SPELL );
- strcat(info, "'s hands started to glow with soft light.");
+ strcat(info, "'s hands start to glow with a soft light.");
msg_type = MSGCH_MONSTER_ENCHANT;
break;
@@ -1728,7 +1728,7 @@
break;
case 11:
strcat(info,
- " screams, \"Don't move! I want to cut your ear!\"");
+ " screams, \"Don't move! I want to cut off your ear!\"");
break;
case 12:
strcat(info,
@@ -1755,10 +1755,10 @@
strcat(info, " screams, \"Die, monster!\"");
break;
case 2:
- strcat(info, " screams, \"Give me Holy Grail!\"");
+ strcat(info, " screams, \"Give me the Holy Grail!\"");
break;
case 3:
- strcat(info, " screams, \"Red! No, blue!\"");
+ strcat(info, " screams, \"Red! No, blue!\"");
break;
case 4:
strcat(info, " looks confused.");
@@ -1767,7 +1767,7 @@
strcat(info, " looks excited.");
break;
case 6:
- strcat(info, " shouts, \"I'm great and powerful hero!\"");
+ strcat(info, " shouts, \"I'm a great and powerful hero!\"");
break;
case 7:
strcat(info,
@@ -1900,14 +1900,14 @@
break;
case 5:
- strcat(info, "'s eyes starts to glow with a red light.");
+ strcat(info, "'s eyes start to glow with a red light.");
break;
case 6:
strcat(info,
- "'s eyes starts to glow with a green light.");
+ "'s eyes start to glow with a green light.");
break;
case 7:
- strcat(info, "'s eyes starts to glow with a blue light.");
+ strcat(info, "'s eyes start to glow with a blue light.");
break;
case 8:
strcat(info, " screams, \"All trespassers must die!\"");
@@ -2342,13 +2342,13 @@
case 15:
strcat(info, " casts a spell.");
mpr(info, MSGCH_MONSTER_SPELL);
- mpr("Suddenly you are surrounded with pale green light.", MSGCH_WARN);
+ mpr("Suddenly you are surrounded with a pale green light.", MSGCH_WARN);
return (true);
case 16:
strcat(info, " casts a spell.");
mpr(info, MSGCH_MONSTER_SPELL);
- mpr("You have terrible head-ache.", MSGCH_WARN);
+ mpr("You have a terrible headache.", MSGCH_WARN);
return (true);
case 17:
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