Re: [V2d-discuss] Events chapter

[Peter H. <pe...@de...>]

Julian Rogers wrote:
> 
> Peter,
> 
> I just realised, that it is my chapter that you are talking about. I will be
> happy for you to e-mail me a comparison file.
> 
> I must say, that I need to re-read if for grammer/spelling. I do not claim
> it to have been checked, and there is a lot more to be done. I am sure a lot
> of my wording will change when I make my first review, as I wanted to get
> something down, before I spent too much time involved with the little
> things.

I'll leave it for now. In my job, one reads with a "red pen" in one's
hand, (though one student convinced her supervisor to use a green pen).
The changes were mainly spelling and punctuation and consistency of font
usage. Nothing major.
-- 
Peter Horan                     School of Computing and Mathematics
pe...@de...             Deakin University
+61-3-5227 1234 (Voice)         Geelong, Victoria 3217, AUSTRALIA
+61-3-5227 2028 (FAX)           http://www.cm.deakin.edu.au/~peter

-- The Eiffel guarantee: From specification to implementation 
-- (http://www.cetus-links.org/oo_eiffel.html)