I'll wait for Rafael to complete the translation of the website before submitting a patch.
In case he finds other issues...
Issue 1) Freedom page links kernel.org as GNU/Linux
http://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/bug-lilypond/2018-07/msg00085.html
Rafael Fontenelle address@hidden ha scritto:
In the below paragraph of http://lilypond.org/freedom.html " “Gift culture”: the Free Software movement has created many great software projects, such as GNU/Linux, Mozilla Firefox, and Battle for Wesnoth. Having benefitted from these projects, some developers want to “give back” to the community. " "GNU/Linux" is a link to http://kernel.org, which is not correct because GNU is the system and Linux is the kernel (more info[1]). How about have "GNU" as a link to http://www.gnu.org and "Linux" as a link to http://kernel.org? [1] https://www.gnu.org/gnu/linux-and-gnu.html
I agree that the link should be changed.
However, GNU is already linked in that page.
kernel.org is a "technical" page.
I'd rather link to a page which is about GNU/Linux distros. As LilyPond is a GNU project, I would use GNU/Linux.
Diff:
Issue 2) Productions page
http://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/bug-lilypond/2018-07/msg00089.html
(For both items below, the related source file is: web/introduction.itexi)
1- In this page there is the following snippet of paragraph:
"He has also worked on the score and parts for an arrangement of
Moussurgsky’s Boris Godounov for wind quartet"
On the other side, a few paragraphs below we find:
"Mussorgsky’s Pictures at an exhibition[...]"
Searching the web, I found "Mussorgsky" and "Godunov" (without 'o'
from 'ou') in pages like e.g. Wikipedia[1], but found no occurrence
"Moussurgsky" and "Godounov". So, just checking: is the spelling
correct?
[1] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Modest_Mussorgsky
2- There is the following the comment in the source file web/introduction.itexi:
@c TRANSLATORS, so far it's mostly from
@c http://lilypond.org/web/switch/testimonials
I notice this link isn't valid, maybe it should be replaced with
http://lilypond.org/productions.html
Typos
In the paragraph:
The Belgian newspaper De Standaard investigates what drives Free
Software authors in an article titled Delen van KENNIS zonder
WINSTBEJAG (Non-profit sharing of knowlegde) in its ‘DS2 bijlage’.
LilyPond is used as an example and the article is interspersed with
quotes from an email interview with Jan Nieuwenhuizen. This marks
LilyPond’s first appearance in mainstream printed press.
"knowlegde" should be "knowledge" ('d' and 'g' swapped)
In the description paragraph for Frescobaldi:
Frescobaldi is a lightweight, yet powerful, music and text editor with
many features added and enhanced particularly for LilyPond. Major
features include point-and-click links between the code and music
views, detailed score wizards, built in LilyPond documentation
browser, syntax highlighting and automatic completion. Frescobaldi is
written in Python, with PyQt4 for its user interface, and will run on
all major operating systems (GNU/Linux, Mac OS X and Windows).
The "built in LilyPond documentation browser" should be "built-in
LilyPond documentation browser" (hyphen added)
Web: fix a few links and typos (issue 5392)
http://codereview.appspot.com/343370043
Passes make, make check and a full make doc.
Patch on countdown for August 26th
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pushed to staging as commit 93f81e29f2e67b5e0f9371db9f6296e0816d827d