#740 "freestanding event" in 13.3.2.2

[Piotr Banski]

In 13.3.2.2 "Personal Events", above the code example:

"In the following example, we give a brief summary of the wedding of Jane Burden to the English writer, designer, and socialist William Morris, encoded as an event element embedded within the person element used to record data about Morris, though we could equally well have embedded the event within the person element for Burden, or have given it as a freestanding event independent of either person element: "

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embedded the event element within the person element for Burden, or have given encoded it as a freestanding event independently of either person element:

(suggestions for insertion in bold)

[Hugh A. Cayless]

Assigning to Stefanie to review.

[Stefanie Gehrke]

the use of a more appropriate language is proposed => apply

[Peter Stadler]

Council working group suggests to also check whether <gi> tags are missing and to rephrase according to the proposal