[Squirrel-sql-commits] SF.net SVN: squirrel-sql:[6684] trunk/sql12/web-site/screenshots.html

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Revision: 6684
          http://squirrel-sql.svn.sourceforge.net/squirrel-sql/?rev=6684&view=rev
Author:   manningr
Date:     2012-10-14 19:58:11 +0000 (Sun, 14 Oct 2012)
Log Message:
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grammar tweaks.

Modified Paths:
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    trunk/sql12/web-site/screenshots.html

Modified: trunk/sql12/web-site/screenshots.html
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--- trunk/sql12/web-site/screenshots.html	2012-10-13 10:05:47 UTC (rev 6683)
+++ trunk/sql12/web-site/screenshots.html	2012-10-14 19:58:11 UTC (rev 6684)
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
 			<P><FONT SIZE=4 STYLE="font-size: 16pt"><B>Features, Screen Shots </B></FONT>
 			</P>
 
-			<P><FONT SIZE=3><B>Object Tree of Session window <BR></B>Right-click to access the popup
+			<P><FONT SIZE=3><B>Object Tree of Session window </B><BR>Right-click to access the popup
 			menu which provides access to advanced script generation and graphing features.  The graph
 			plugin allows the user to create <A HREF="./screenshots/7_graph.png"> table charts</A>.</FONT></P>
 
@@ -54,8 +54,8 @@
                                                            style="max-height: 500px" BORDER=2><BR CLEAR=LEFT><BR></A><BR>
 			</P>
 
-			<P><FONT SIZE=3><B>SQL Editor with code completion popup (ctrl+space)
-				open<BR></B>Code completion can be used to access drop-down lists of
+			<P><FONT SIZE=3><B>SQL Editor with code completion popup (ctrl+space) open</B><BR>
+				Code completion can be used to access drop-down lists of
 				options that include keywords, tables, columns, views, stored procedures. 
 				Code completion also provides join generation functions. For example, look at the table
 				structure <A HREF="./screenshots/7_graph.png">here</A>. Hitting ctrl+space after the expression
@@ -68,8 +68,8 @@
                                                             style="max-height: 500px" NAME="5_codecompletion.png" ALIGN=LEFT BORDER=2><BR CLEAR=LEFT>
 			</A><BR><BR>
 
-			<P><FONT SIZE=3><B>SQL Editor with tools popup menu (ctrl+t) shown <BR>
-			    </B>With the tools popup any editor function can be located with 
+			<P><FONT SIZE=3><B>SQL Editor with tools popup menu (ctrl+t)</B><BR>
+			    With the tools popup any editor function can be located with 
 				    only a single short cut: ctrl+t <BR>  Additionally, the list can 
 					be searched incrementally with just a few keystrokes.</FONT> 
 		    </P>
@@ -79,8 +79,8 @@
 				<BR><BR>
 			</P>
 
-			<P><FONT SIZE=3><B>SQL Editor with bookmark selection popup (ctrl+j)
-				shown<BR></B>Bookmarks are user-defined code templates. SQuirreL
+			<P><FONT SIZE=3><B>SQL Editor with bookmark selection popup (ctrl+j)</B><BR>
+				Bookmarks are user-defined code templates. SQuirreL
 				comes with several pre-defined example bookmarks for the most common SQL
 				and DDL statements.</FONT></P>
 
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
 			</P>
 
             <!--
-			<P><FONT SIZE=3><B>Abbreviations and auto corrections dialog<BR></B>This
+			<P><FONT SIZE=3><B>Abbreviations and auto corrections dialog</B><BR>This
 				feature works much like auto corrects in common office products. With
 				the entries shown in the dialog you may for example type 'sf&lt;space&gt;'
 				which will expand to 'SELECT * FROM'.</FONT></P>
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
 			</P>
 			-->
 
-			<P><FONT SIZE=3><B>Editing of SQL results.<BR></B>The result tabs of SQL
+			<P><FONT SIZE=3><B>Editing of SQL results.</B><BR>The result tabs of SQL
 				queries support editing the rows returned from a query on a single table. You
 				may also edit the contents tab of tables in the Object tree.</FONT></P>
 
@@ -108,16 +108,16 @@
                                                              style="max-height: 500px" BORDER=2><BR CLEAR=LEFT></A><BR><BR>
 			</P>
 
-			<P><FONT SIZE=3><B>Graph: Charts of tables and their relations / Query builder.<BR></B>To create new charts or to add tables to
+			<P><FONT SIZE=3><B>Graph: Charts of tables and their relations / Query builder.</B><BR>To create new charts or to add tables to
 				existing charts right
-				mouse click tables in the Object tree and choose the 'Add to graph' menu.
+				mouse click on selected tables in the Object tree and choose the 'Add to graph' menu.
 				Graph manipulation functions can be accessed by using the right-click context popup menu or the arrow button on the lower left.</FONT></P>
 
-			<P><A HREF="screenshots/7_graph.png"><IMG SRC="screenshots/7_graph.png" NAME="7_graph.png" ALIGN=LEFT BORDER=2 style="max-height: 500px"><BR
-				CLEAR=LEFT></A><BR><BR>
+			<P><A HREF="screenshots/7_graph.png"><IMG SRC="screenshots/7_graph.png" NAME="7_graph.png" ALIGN=LEFT BORDER=2 style="max-height: 500px">
+			<BR CLEAR=LEFT></A><BR><BR>
 			</P>
 
-            <P><FONT SIZE=3><B>Functionality offerd by the Graph plugin are:<BR></B>
+            <P><FONT SIZE=3><B>Functionality provided by the Graph plugin:</B><BR>
                 <OL>
                     <LI><P>Query Building with instant SQL query generation and executing</P>
                     <LI><P>Saving in Jpeg format</P>
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@
 
 
     <P><FONT SIZE=3><B>
-        For a more detailed though not up to data description see the paper by Gerd Wagner and Glenn Griffin:<BR>
+        For a more detailed (though not up-to-date) description, see the paper by Gerd Wagner and Glenn Griffin:<BR>
         <a href="./paper/SQuirreL_us.pdf">English version</a><BR>
         <a href="./paper/SQuirreL_de.pdf">German version</a><BR>
         <a href="./paper/SQuirreL_it.pdf">Italian version</a>, translation by Meo Bogliolo

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