[Squirrel-sql-commits] SF.net SVN: squirrel-sql:[6472] trunk/sql12/plugins/sqlscript/src/main/ resources/doc/readme.html

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Revision: 6472
          http://squirrel-sql.svn.sourceforge.net/squirrel-sql/?rev=6472&view=rev
Author:   manningr
Date:     2011-11-05 14:20:37 +0000 (Sat, 05 Nov 2011)
Log Message:
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Polished grammar of documentation for the new export SQL to file feature.

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    trunk/sql12/plugins/sqlscript/src/main/resources/doc/readme.html

Modified: trunk/sql12/plugins/sqlscript/src/main/resources/doc/readme.html
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--- trunk/sql12/plugins/sqlscript/src/main/resources/doc/readme.html	2011-11-05 13:09:30 UTC (rev 6471)
+++ trunk/sql12/plugins/sqlscript/src/main/resources/doc/readme.html	2011-11-05 14:20:37 UTC (rev 6472)
@@ -56,16 +56,17 @@
 				entry Session => Scripts => Store result of SQL in file</P> <IMG
 			SRC="sql2file.jpg" NAME="sql2file" ALIGN=LEFT BORDER=0><BR
 			CLEAR=LEFT> <BR> <BR> After this, the control dialog
-			appears. This dialog give you the control about target, type and data
-			format. Be careful, if you decide to export the data into the MS
-			Excel format. In this case, the result is build in memory and
-			SQuirreL SQL may run out of memory.<BR> <BR> <IMG
+			appears. This dialog allows you to specify various options including the 
+			target file and options such as the data format. Be careful when choosing 
+			the MS Excel format as it requires the entire result set to be stored in 
+			memory. In this case, if the result set is large, SQuirreL SQL may run 
+			out of memory.<BR> <BR> <IMG
 			SRC="sql2file_exportController.jpg" NAME="sql2file" ALIGN=LEFT
 			BORDER=0><BR CLEAR=LEFT> <BR> <BR> The export is
 			done on a new database connection, so the user can continue
-			using SQuirreL SQL while exporting the data. A progress monitor show
-			the progress of the export and you can cancel it any time. If the
-			export if done, the progress dialog disappears. <BR> <BR> <IMG
+			using SQuirreL SQL while exporting the data. A progress monitor shows
+			the progress of the export and you can cancel it any time. When the
+			export is complete, the progress dialog will be hidden. <BR> <BR> <IMG
 			SRC="sql2file_progress.jpg" NAME="sql2file" ALIGN=LEFT BORDER=0>
 			<BR CLEAR=LEFT> <BR> <BR></LI>
 	</ul>

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