[sed-ml-editors] [ sed-ml-SED-ML L1V1-3082450 ] last para of 4.1.1 ungrammatical

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SED-ML L1V1 item #3082450, was opened at 2010-10-06 21:42
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Category: Specification content
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Status: Open
Resolution: None
Priority: 3
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Submitted By: Richard Adams (otter606)
Assigned to: Nobody/Anonymous (nobody)
Summary: last para of 4.1.1 ungrammatical

Initial Comment:
... the language attribute is strongly encouraged. Not only does it help a user decide 
whether or not he is able to run the simulation, that is to parse the model referenced in the SED-ML 
file. The language attribute is also needed to...

Suggest change :

... the language attribute is strongly encouraged for two reasons. Firstly, it helps a user decide 
whether or not he is able to run the simulation, that is to parse the model referenced in the SED-ML 
file. Secondly, the language attribute is also needed to..


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