Re: [Ryu-devel] [PATCH v3] doc: internal document on openstack cooperation

[FUJITA T. <fuj...@la...>]

On Thu,  7 Feb 2013 12:18:53 +0900
Isaku Yamahata <yam...@va...> wrote:

> Signed-off-by: Isaku Yamahata <yam...@va...>
> ---
> Changes v2 -> v3:
> - trivial rebase
> - minor fixes for rst
> 
> Changes v1 -> v2:
> - on live-migration

- Why we have 'OpenStack Integraiton->How Ryu L2 segegation works' and
'Ryu Internals->Ryu L2 isolation'? We need to merge them.

- A typo in the first pic: remote_pdid?

- In the left side at the first pic, vlan/tunnel key. In the right
  side, tunnel id? Why different names?

- Boot up process looks incorrect. For example, Ryu configures OVS
  about target IP.

- The details of 'initialize ovs' at 'boot up'. Enabling remote OVS DB
  access, etc.

- Where is rpc at 'boot up process'?

- What's 'tunnel ip'? It's not 'overview'.

- In Network creation, (network id, key)? Please consistent with the
  overview about wordings. There are such inconsistent words in other
  pics. Please check all the pics again.