On Sat, May 10, 2008 at 1:53 PM, Iain Cheyne <ia...@ch...> wrote:
> http://cheyne.net/tmp/rails/
>
> What do you think?
>
> The main change is the first line that states exactly what Rails is
> and what it can do. I was a bit confused when I first stumbled upon
> Rails, as I thought that it might include an AI.
>
> --
> Iain
>
Well, we'd eventually like to support an AI, but we're not very close
to that (and don't really have anyone interested in developing AI).
That said, I do like the modified description. The map image is a bit
too big; it overwhelms the text.
Also, I prefer a more structured layout. We've got some distinct
categories of information that we need to provide. Each of them need
to be clear and easy to find. Your changes make it difficult to see
what content the page provides.
Perhaps you can try updating the description without changing the
layout quite so much?
It's a good start. I like the basic idea that you've got. Keep working on it.
---Brett.
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