Re: [Rails-devel] 1856 SR escrow reporting

[Erik V. <eri...@xs...>]

I frankly don't see any substantial difference between these two
formulations.
Now English isn't my mother language, so I'm open to be corrected...

Erik. 

-----Original Message-----
From: Aliza Panitz [mailto:ali...@gm...] 
Sent: Friday 15 January 2010 22:22
To: Development list for Rails: an 18xx game
Subject: [Rails-devel] 1856 SR escrow reporting

A nitpick from the SR report window:

Joshua buys a 10% share of LPS from IPO for $65.
The price ($325) is paid to the Bank which holds it in escrow for LPS

This is misleading, and can confuse newer players.  How about:

The price is paid to the Bank which now holds $325 in escrow for LPS

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