From: Dan S. <da...@da...> - 2002-01-06 16:52:06
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I'm the new kid in town, so I can fearlessly jump into the marketing fray. So I will! I think most of the release announcement is just fine. It just needs a little marketing sizzle up front and one or two other places. Here's my cut at a new first paragraph. It may be too wordy; I don't know the audience or the traditions involved here. But I think it captures the essence of PythonCard without setting up false expectations. "PythonCard brings visual software development on Open Source tools to the masses, picking up where Apple's immensely popular but now-abandoned HyperCard product left off. Written entirely in the widely used and respected object-oriented Python scripting language, PythonCard enables end users to create applications and interfaces in a style that is reminiscent of Microsoft Visual Basic without the baggage of over-complexity for non-programmers. It then enables the developer with some minimal amount of programming or scripting experience to give the user's designs life and power through Python scripting." Then I think it might be helpful to add a few words of description to some of the cooler samples and list only those that _are_ cool (to the intended audience) rather than trying to be exhaustive. For the release statement, I'd leave out stuff that won't matter until they download the product (e.g., "A description of each...."). Well, there's a start for people to react to at least. -- Dan Shafer, Author-Consultant http://www.danshafer.com http://www.shafermedia.com |