[perl-xml-cvs] CVS: perl-xml-faq perl-xml-faq.xml,1.25,1.26

[Grant M. <gr...@us...>]

Update of /cvsroot/perl-xml/perl-xml-faq
In directory sc8-pr-cvs1.sourceforge.net:/tmp/cvs-serv1566

Modified Files:
	perl-xml-faq.xml 
Log Message:
- minor wording tweaks

Index: perl-xml-faq.xml
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RCS file: /cvsroot/perl-xml/perl-xml-faq/perl-xml-faq.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.25
retrieving revision 1.26
diff -u -d -r1.25 -r1.26
--- perl-xml-faq.xml	13 Nov 2006 23:07:15 -0000	1.25
+++ perl-xml-faq.xml	14 Nov 2006 08:39:28 -0000	1.26
@@ -722,11 +722,11 @@
       <para>This module implements a SAX2 interface around the expat library,
       so it's fast, stable and complete. XML::SAX::Expat doesn't link expat
       directly but through <classname>XML::Parser</classname>. Hence, this
-      module requires <classname>XML::Parser</classname>, and doesn't to
-      compile any XS code on installation. If you've just installed
-      <classname>XML::SAX</classname> and <classname>XML::Parser</classname> 
-      you'll want to install this module to improve on the speed and encoding 
-      support offered by <classname>XML::SAX::PurePerl</classname>.</para>
+      module requires <classname>XML::Parser</classname>, and doesn't compile
+      any XS code on installation. If you have <classname>XML::SAX</classname>
+      and <classname>XML::Parser</classname> installed, you'll want to install
+      this module to improve on the speed and encoding support offered by
+      <classname>XML::SAX::PurePerl</classname>.</para>
 
       <para>Robin Berjon is the author of this module although he claims to
       have stolen the code from Ken MacLeod.</para>
@@ -747,7 +747,7 @@
       no dependence on <classname>XML::Parser</classname> but either some XS
       code must be compiled or a binary package installed.</para>
 
-      <para>This module has been started by Matt Sergeant and completed by
+      <para>This module was started by Matt Sergeant and completed by
       Petr Cimprich.</para>
 
     </answer>
@@ -759,12 +759,12 @@
     </question>
     <answer>
 
-      <para>The <classname>XML::SAX::Writer</classname> module is a common 
-      and stable XML writer for the SAX2 interface. This module can receive 
+      <para>The <classname>XML::SAX::Writer</classname> module is used to
+      generate XML output from a SAX2 pipeline. This module can receive 
       pluggable consumer and encoder objects. The default encoder is based 
       on <classname>Text::Iconv</classname>.</para>
 
-      <para><classname>XML::SAX::Writer</classname> has been created by 
+      <para><classname>XML::SAX::Writer</classname> was created by 
       Robin Berjon.</para>
 
     </answer>