Re: [oll-user] First paragraph of tutorial reads slightly oddly

[Urs L. <ul...@op...>]

Thanks, Ian,

sounds good, and I'll incorporate it as soon as I have the opportunity.

Urs

Am 11.04.2013 18:15, schrieb Ian Hulin:
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> Hi Urs, Janek,
>
> The first paragraph of the tutorial reads slightly clunkily to a
> native-speaker. Could I suggest the following as a re-draft?
>
> LilyPond has extensive documentation, which is an excellent state of
> affairs when compared to most other Open Source software packages.
> However there are still some occasions when new or even more advanced
> user could do with some more detailed explanations.
>
> The documentation is mostly reference material and so does not take
> very much time in leading the user the key concepts in the appropriate
> order.
>
> This is where our tutorials aim to help out. They each concentrate on
> a single topic, and can afford to dwell on that however long as its
> author considers appropriate.
>
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