[oll-user] First paragraph of tutorial reads slightly oddly

[Ian H. <ia...@hu...>]

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Hi Urs, Janek,

The first paragraph of the tutorial reads slightly clunkily to a
native-speaker. Could I suggest the following as a re-draft?

LilyPond has extensive documentation, which is an excellent state of
affairs when compared to most other Open Source software packages.
However there are still some occasions when new or even more advanced
user could do with some more detailed explanations.

The documentation is mostly reference material and so does not take
very much time in leading the user the key concepts in the appropriate
order.

This is where our tutorials aim to help out. They each concentrate on
a single topic, and can afford to dwell on that however long as its
author considers appropriate.


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