From: Greg F. <gre...@ya...> - 2003-07-07 02:46:21
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More simple tidbits: 1. OpenInteract2::Manual::Intro, last sentence of "Controller" description says "... from once place." (should be "from one place.") 2. In OpenInteract2::Manual::QuickStart, the first bullet under "Prerequisites" states "This is the normal four-step installation process...". It would be nice to have a link to the normal process. 3. In OpenInteract2::Manual::QuickStart, the last bullet under "Prerequisites" has a link to "SEE ALSO", but it doesn't work. That HREF is to "#" but should be to "#SEE_ALSO". 4. In OpenInteract2::Manual::QuickStart, it should be explicitly stated that LWP is being used as the webserver. This should probably be stated before or at the very beginning of "Creating A Website". I found myself wondering if/how I was going to set up Apache without affecting my existing website. 5. In OpenInteract2::Manual::QuickStart, it says that the daemon can be killed by kill -15 `cat oi2.pid`, but nowhere did we state where oi2.pid is created (in $PWD when oi2_daemon is run). If there is a way to specify where the PID file can go, this should be indicated. If there isn't, then there should be :-) 6. Now that I have my very own OI2 running (the QuickStart, running with LWP and SQLite), I login as superuser and go to "Object Activity". I set "Activity By" to superuser and click "Search". The resulting table shows dates of "DateTime=HASH(0x891d9c4)" instead of the actual date/time. 7. In OpenInteract2::Manual::Architecture, Step 0 of TRACING A REQUEST says "[The adapter] will run a number of processes at server startup" I don't believe that a number of "processes" run, but that a bunch of "tasks" or "jobs" are performed. Since its talking about the startup of a server, the phrase "process" might make a developer or administrator leary of OI2. 8. In OpenInteract2::Manual::Architecture, Step 6 of TRACING A REQUEST is missing the first letter of the very first word ("he" instead of "The"). 9. In OpenInteract2::Manual::Architecture, Step 7 of TRACING A REQUEST the logic of the section is backwards. It starts off with "Find out if the task is invalid", but then lists points of validity (not invalidity). Also, the very last point is vague (*what* is listed there?). Hope this helps, greg_fenton. ===== Greg Fenton gre...@ya... __________________________________ Do you Yahoo!? SBC Yahoo! DSL - Now only $29.95 per month! http://sbc.yahoo.com |