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From: Greg F. <gre...@ya...> - 2003-07-07 02:46:21
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More simple tidbits:
1. OpenInteract2::Manual::Intro, last sentence of "Controller"
description says "... from once place." (should be "from one
place.")
2. In OpenInteract2::Manual::QuickStart, the first bullet under
"Prerequisites" states "This is the normal four-step installation
process...". It would be nice to have a link to the normal process.
3. In OpenInteract2::Manual::QuickStart, the last bullet under
"Prerequisites" has a link to "SEE ALSO", but it doesn't work.
That HREF is to "#" but should be to "#SEE_ALSO".
4. In OpenInteract2::Manual::QuickStart, it should be explicitly stated
that LWP is being used as the webserver. This should probably be
stated before or at the very beginning of "Creating A Website". I
found myself wondering if/how I was going to set up Apache without
affecting my existing website.
5. In OpenInteract2::Manual::QuickStart, it says that the daemon can
be killed by kill -15 `cat oi2.pid`, but nowhere did we state where
oi2.pid is created (in $PWD when oi2_daemon is run). If there is a
way to specify where the PID file can go, this should be indicated.
If there isn't, then there should be :-)
6. Now that I have my very own OI2 running (the QuickStart, running
with
LWP and SQLite), I login as superuser and go to "Object Activity".
I
set "Activity By" to superuser and click "Search". The resulting
table shows dates of "DateTime=HASH(0x891d9c4)" instead of the
actual
date/time.
7. In OpenInteract2::Manual::Architecture, Step 0 of TRACING A REQUEST
says "[The adapter] will run a number of processes at server
startup"
I don't believe that a number of "processes" run, but that a bunch
of "tasks" or "jobs" are performed. Since its talking about the
startup of a server, the phrase "process" might make a developer
or administrator leary of OI2.
8. In OpenInteract2::Manual::Architecture, Step 6 of TRACING A REQUEST
is missing the first letter of the very first word ("he" instead of
"The").
9. In OpenInteract2::Manual::Architecture, Step 7 of TRACING A REQUEST
the logic of the section is backwards. It starts off with "Find out
if the task is invalid", but then lists points of validity (not
invalidity). Also, the very last point is vague (*what* is
listed there?).
Hope this helps,
greg_fenton.
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Greg Fenton
gre...@ya...
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