Re: [Obi-coord] release manuscript

[Bjoern P. <bp...@li...>]

Sorry, I was unclear: I agree that the names on the section headers are 
meant for housekeeping, and are useful. For removal, I was referring to 
a few mentions of names in the main manuscript text e.g. "This effort 
was led and documented by Daniel Schober under the OBO Foundry auspice".

- Bjoern

PS: I am adding sections from Jennifer now that I had forgotten.



James Malone wrote:
> Bjoern,
>
> Thanks for working hard on this.  For the sections I have written 
> please feel free to take my name off.  Personally, I would like to see 
> all names removed from bits of text in the final version as this is 
> going to get very messy otherwise; I presumed they were there 
> temporarily for housekeeping purposes as we write the script.
>
> James
>
>
>
> Bjoern Peters wrote:
>> Hi all,
>> I have just committed the next version of the obi manuscript. in
>> http://obi.svn.sourceforge.net/viewvc/obi/trunk/docs/papers/release/Release-Manuscript-Master-bp.doc 
>>
>>
>> It is still missing many things, and I have not gotten as far in 
>> polishing as I hoped, but today was my deadline for getting the next 
>> version out, and I don't want to just sit on it.
>>
>> Most importantly: If you  have send me something for the manuscript, 
>> please check if you find it in the current version. If not, please 
>> remind me to put it in.
>> Also important: If you have an outstanding section, please check what 
>> you think you need to complete it. I want to discuss the state of the 
>> manuscript in Wednesday's call.
>>
>> This is what I did compared to the last version
>> - Acted upon Larissa's comments, or added them as comment bubbles to 
>> the text. This primarily led to a rewritten introduction.
>> -  removed a few redundant sentences
>> - included Daniel's edits
>> - added Melanies branch figure
>> - added branch descriptions (PlanAndPlannedProcess +data transformation)
>> - added use cases (James, mine)
>>
>> I have a request: There are some sections that point out who 
>> specifically contributed what. I would like either a) remove those 
>> completely or b) move all specific mention of names into an 
>> acknowledgement section. If we leave them in the text, we run the 
>> risk of adding to each section who contributed what, which the 
>> average reader will not care about at all.
>>
>> - Bjoern
>>
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