[Kernelbook-feedback] kernelbook-feedback - isapnp

[Armin K. <ak...@mv...>]

Some comments & feedback

1) I think it makes easier reading it the NOTES are on the same page as
the reference only because I am a lazy person and don't want to turn the
pages. see pages 2 & 5
2) Does it make sense to have a glossary of terms?? e.g. LFSR & CSN
3) The explanation of the function vars seemed to blend in with the
description.  I think they should standout somehow.
4) There are periods at the beginning of the middle paragraph on page 16
and first paragraph on page 18 and the word "routine." on page 17.  It
looks as if they belong to the previous sentence???

All-in-all I thought it was a very good chapter.

cheers,

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