SF.net SVN: jazzplusplus: [514] web/htdocs

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Revision: 514
          http://jazzplusplus.svn.sourceforge.net/jazzplusplus/?rev=514&view=rev
Author:   pstieber
Date:     2008-05-11 22:15:00 -0700 (Sun, 11 May 2008)

Log Message:
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Applied a patch provided by Donald B. Moore.
>From DM...
This patch corrects (hopefully) all outstanding typos, spelling,
and other grammatical issues in the committed files.
Apart from simple corrections, some wording has been slightly
changed/rearranged to facilitate paragraph formatting. A bit
more 'user encouragement' has been added to the subversion
content regarding svn builds. These are the only deviations
from he content of the original texts at this time.
>From PS...
Donald, I'll move these changes up to the web site tonight.

Modified Paths:
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    web/htdocs/download/index.php
    web/htdocs/index.php
    web/htdocs/subversion/index.php

Modified: web/htdocs/download/index.php
===================================================================
--- web/htdocs/download/index.php	2008-05-12 05:12:41 UTC (rev 513)
+++ web/htdocs/download/index.php	2008-05-12 05:15:00 UTC (rev 514)
@@ -16,11 +16,11 @@
 <TD class="mainCopy">
 <H2>Downloading Jazz++</H2>
 <P>
-Currenly, only a source tarball is available.  You would probably have more
+Currently, only a source tarball is available.  You would probably have more
 success attempting to build the source in Subversion.  We simply aren't ready
-to produce binary distributions.  If you still want to give the source tarball
-a try, you need to create a non-stock build of wxWidgets 2.8.7 to build Jazz++.
-View the <a href="/buildingwx/">Building wxWidgets</a> page for details.
+to produce binary distributions yet. If you still want to give the source tarball
+a try, you first need to create a non-stock build of wxWidgets 2.8.7 to build 
+Jazz++. View the <a href="/buildingwx/">Building wxWidgets</a> page for details.
 </P>
 <P>
 <A href="http://sourceforge.net/project/showfiles.php?group_id=104252">Download

Modified: web/htdocs/index.php
===================================================================
--- web/htdocs/index.php	2008-05-12 05:12:41 UTC (rev 513)
+++ web/htdocs/index.php	2008-05-12 05:15:00 UTC (rev 514)
@@ -25,10 +25,10 @@
 <p>
 The Jazz++ Midi Sequencer is an excellent application for recording and mixing
 MIDI sequences, and for many years was the only stable application like it that
-ran under both Windows and Linux.  Unfortunately, it has not been
-well-maintained and is starting to look a little long in the tooth.  It was
+ran under both Windows and Linux.  Unfortunately, it has not been well 
+maintained and was starting to look a little long in the tooth.  It was
 also written with the venerable wxWindows version 1.68, which is not only
-obsolete, but isn't even called wxWindows anymore.
+now obsolete, but isn't even called wxWindows anymore.
 </p>
 <p>
 In order to return Jazz++ to relevance, and in the process turn it into the

Modified: web/htdocs/subversion/index.php
===================================================================
--- web/htdocs/subversion/index.php	2008-05-12 05:12:41 UTC (rev 513)
+++ web/htdocs/subversion/index.php	2008-05-12 05:15:00 UTC (rev 514)
@@ -24,18 +24,19 @@
 <p>
 Linux distributions and Mac OS X supply command-line clients for Subversion.
 <a href="http://tortoisesvn.tigris.org/">TortoiseSVN</a> is an easy to use
-Subversion client for windows that is integrated into the windows explorer.
+Subversion client for Windows that is integrated into the windows explorer.
 </p>
 <p>
 The code in the Subversion repository can be unstable at times.  Building the
-code will take some effort on your parr, but we have provided instructions for
-building the code, so this should be possible for "non-developers".
+code will take some effort on your part, but we have provided instructions for
+building the source code, so this should also be possible for "non-developers"
+to complete successfully.
 </p>
 <p>
 Since Jazz++ is currently in a development state, code from the Subversion
 repository is the best place to get the latest fixes and features as they are
 added.  Until we reach the point when we are creating binaries to download, we
-hope you will give builing Jazz++ form Subversion a try.
+hope you will give building Jazz++ from Subversion a try.
 </p>
 <h3>Retrieving the source using Subversion</h3>
 <p>


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