Re: [idxp-java-discuss] IDXP-03 RC4

[John C. C. W. <jc...@mi...>]

A few comments:

Section 3.3   I think the first sentence should be "MUST" instead of
"may", unless there are other MIME content-types possible.

Section 3.4.1  The last sentence of the first paragraph should start
with "One" instead of "Zero." Otherwise it's just a tautology (i.e.,
there are no other conceivable possibilities, so it's not meaningful).
Same for the only paragraph of section 3.4.2, and the third paragraph of
section 4.

Section 4   The third paragraph says that the "mustUnderstand" attribute
MUST be present, but it isn't present in the first two examples after
that, and some of the later text essentially forbids it. Perhaps it
should be optional, with an assumed value of FALSE, if it is not present?

Section 8.2 and 8.3  There are two lines that exceed the allowable line
width; they need to be rearranged or have a continuation character inserted.

Appendix B.1   Should include "Modified Sections 2, 3 and 4 to use the
requirements language specified by [2]."

And finally, a true nit-pick: I believe that when a sentence ends with a
quoted element, the final period belongs INSIDE the closing quotation
mark. This is not necessarily logical, but there are several cases in
the document which violate this usage. My dictionary is a little vague
on this, and I won't be offended at all if this comment is simply ignored.

-John-



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