[Fb-contrib-commit] SF.net SVN: fb-contrib:[1385] trunk/fb-contrib/etc/messages.xml

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Revision: 1385
          http://fb-contrib.svn.sourceforge.net/fb-contrib/?rev=1385&view=rev
Author:   dbrosius
Date:     2009-11-14 20:07:23 +0000 (Sat, 14 Nov 2009)

Log Message:
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better engrish

Modified Paths:
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    trunk/fb-contrib/etc/messages.xml

Modified: trunk/fb-contrib/etc/messages.xml
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--- trunk/fb-contrib/etc/messages.xml	2009-11-13 14:07:50 UTC (rev 1384)
+++ trunk/fb-contrib/etc/messages.xml	2009-11-14 20:07:23 UTC (rev 1385)
@@ -2585,12 +2585,12 @@
 		<LongDescription>method {1} uses a set of collections</LongDescription>
 		<Details>
 			<![CDATA[
-			<p>This method creates a set that contains other collections, or a Map who's keySet is
+			<p>This method creates a set that contains other collections, or a Map whose keySet is
 			another collection. As collections tend to calculate hashCode, equals and compareTo by 
 			iterating the contents of the collection, this can perform poorly.</p>
-			<p>In addition, when a set is used, you typically are using it to do contains, or find
-			type functionality, which seems dubious when do so on a collection</p>
-			<p>Finally, As a collection is often modified, problems will occur if the collection is 
+			<p>In addition, when a set is used, you typically are using it to do 'contains', or 'find'
+			type functionality, which seems dubious when done on a collection</p>
+			<p>Finally, as a collection is often modified, problems will occur if the collection is 
 			contained in a set, because the hashCode, equals or compareTo values will change while the
 			collection is in the set</p>
 			<p>If you wish to maintain a collection of collections, it is probably better to use a List


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