Hello for the first time everyone. Long time lurker, first time doing
anything :-/
I read through and it looks good to me. One thing is that some sections
could use indentation, i.e. the content under the minor headings in the
playlist section...
* Create a playlist
Creating a playlist is very easy. The first time you start aTunes, you will
be able to find a new empty playlist in the centre of the window. To create
a new playlist, simply click on the Playlist button at the top of the
playlist area, and select New PlayList. After that, click on the new tab
labeled 'Playlist 1.' You will see a new empty playlist.
Could look like....
* Create a playlist
Creating a playlist is very easy. The first time you start aTunes...
To create a new playlist, simply click on the Playlist button a...
new tab labeled 'Playlist 1.' You will see a new empty playlist.
Also, how do you feel about putting key/action words, like things you click
in the app such as "Playlist" and "New PlayList" from above, inside of
"<b><tt>" tags? I think they would pop more and it would be a useful
convention.
I just applied for a wiki account, so I'd be happy to make the changes if
everyone agrees.
- John Hobbs
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On Wed, Nov 12, 2008 at 1:34 PM, Alex Rodabaugh <A.R...@sm...>wrote:
> Hey Everyone,
>
> I went through the entire User's Manual and edited the grammar and
> spelling. I kept the non-American English spellings though :-). The
> manual was pretty well put together and with all the glaring grammar
> mistakes taken out it should be one step closer to perfection.
>
> Please look it over:
> http://www.atunes.org/wiki/index.php?title=User%27s_manual
>
> and let me know of anything that doesn't look right. I inserted a few
> internal and external links and tried to keep consistency within the
> sections but it can always be done better. If you think there are
> sections missing or anything that is blatantly false, please also let
> me know.
>
> -Alex
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