#58 Volume Control Modules grammar issue

closed
Martin
Modules (26)
1
2010-06-15
2010-06-08
FWishbringer
No

"Note that some mixers won't work and for some there might be doubled entries on the list. You will just have to try and test to find the one you need."
would be better written
"Some mixers may appear to be listed twice, and some may have no effect.\nYou will need to try each one to find the one that you need."

In the original, it is a run-on with no comma before the "and".

Discussion

  • FWishbringer
    FWishbringer
    2010-06-08

    • priority: 5 --> 1
     
  • Martin
    Martin
    2010-06-15

    • status: open --> closed
     
  • Martin
    Martin
    2010-06-15

    4326