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Diff of /docs/trunk/oodialog/en-US/Preface.xml [r9078] .. [r9079] Maximize Restore

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--- a/docs/trunk/oodialog/en-US/Preface.xml
+++ b/docs/trunk/oodialog/en-US/Preface.xml
@@ -103,15 +103,15 @@
   this time.
 </para>
 <para>
-  In this reference, the syntax diagrams being presented are the syntax for method or attribute invocations, and routine
-  calls. The diagrams show the method, attribute, or routine name and their arguments. For method or attribute invocations,
-  the section the method or attribute is included in, and / or the text itself, make it clear as to which class the method
-  belongs to. The following defines how the syntax diagrams are to be read:
+  In this reference, the syntax diagrams being presented are the diagrams of the syntax for method, attribute, and routine
+  invocations. The diagrams show the method, attribute, or routine name and the arguments for the invocation. For method or
+  attribute invocations, the section the method or attribute is included in, and / or the text itself, make it clear as to
+  which class the method belongs to. The following defines how the syntax diagrams are to be read:
 </para>
 <itemizedlist>
 <listitem>
 <para>
-  Each syntax diagram is for a single method or attribute invocation, or for a single routine call.
+  Each syntax diagram is for a single method, attribute, or routine invocation,
 </para>
 </listitem>
 <listitem>
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
 <listitem>
 <para>
   The method, attribute, or routine name is the first token, (first word,) on the horizontal line (the main path).
-  Parentheses, enclose the arguments, if there are any arguments.
+  Parentheses enclose the arguments, if there are any arguments.
 
 <programlisting>
 <![CDATA[
@@ -214,8 +214,8 @@
 </para>
 <programlisting>
 <![CDATA[
->>--createFontEx(--fontName-+--------------+--+---------------+--)-------------><
-                            +-,-pointSize--+  +-,-additional--+
+>>--createFontEx(--fontName--+----------------+--+-----------------+--)--------><
+                             +--,--pointSize--+  +--,--additional--+
 ]]>
 </programlisting>
 <para>
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@
 <important><title>Important</title>
   <para>
     Although the reader may prefer to interpret the syntax diagrams in some other way than that just explained, any other
-    interpretation is simply <emphasis role="bold">incorrect</emphasis>.
+    interpretation is not correct.
   </para>
 </important>
 </section>