[brlcad-commits] SF.net SVN: brlcad:[62728] brlcad/trunk/doc/docbook/system/man1/en/rt.xml

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Revision: 62728
          http://sourceforge.net/p/brlcad/code/62728
Author:   carlmoore
Date:     2014-09-15 17:30:14 +0000 (Mon, 15 Sep 2014)
Log Message:
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adjust use of periods (no underscore of punctuation marks, and supply space before some ending periods, and remove 2 periods

Modified Paths:
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    brlcad/trunk/doc/docbook/system/man1/en/rt.xml

Modified: brlcad/trunk/doc/docbook/system/man1/en/rt.xml
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--- brlcad/trunk/doc/docbook/system/man1/en/rt.xml	2014-09-15 17:21:15 UTC (rev 62727)
+++ brlcad/trunk/doc/docbook/system/man1/en/rt.xml	2014-09-15 17:30:14 UTC (rev 62728)
@@ -42,7 +42,8 @@
       in the option list. The orientation of the rays to be fired may be specified by
       the <option>-a</option> and <option>-e</option> options, in which case the model
       will be autosized, and the grid will be centered on the centroid of the model, with
-      ray spacing chosen to span the entire set of <emphasis remap="I">objects.</emphasis>
+
+,      ray spacing chosen to span the entire set of <emphasis remap="I">objects</emphasis>.
       Alternatively, with the <option>-M</option> option, a transformation matrix may
       be provided on standard input which maps model-space to view-space. In this case,
       the grid ranges from -1.0 = X,Y = +1.0 in view space, with the size of the grid
@@ -143,7 +144,7 @@
 	  Ordinarily, the cell width is computed by dividing the view size by
 	  the number of pixels of width, so this option need not be used.
 	  To obtain exactly 1 inch ray spacing, specify
-	  <option>-g25.4.</option>
+	  <option>-g25.4 .</option>
 	  If the grid cell width is specified and
 	  the grid cell height is <emphasis remap="I">not</emphasis> specified,
 	  the grid cell height defaults to be the same as the width.</para>
@@ -163,7 +164,7 @@
 	  <para>color = color * f + hazeRGB * g</para>
 
 	  <para>The color values are optional.  If not specified, they will have the passable
-	  values 0.8 .9 .99.</para>
+	  values 0.8 .9 .99 .</para>
 
 	  <para>Example usage: -h '2.5e-8,.75,.95,.99'</para>
 	</listitem>
@@ -249,7 +250,7 @@
 	  <para>-l7,Num_Photons,Caustics_Percent,Irradiance_Rays,Angular_Tolerance,
 	  Random_Seed,Importance_Mapping_Toggle,Irradiance_Hypersampling_Toggle,
 	  Visual_Irradiance_Toggle,Scale_Lumens,Load_Save_File</para>
-	  <para>Example: -l7,16384,0,10,60.0,0,0,0,0,1.0,scene.pm.</para>
+	  <para>Example: -l7,16384,0,10,60.0,0,0,0,0,1.0,scene.pm</para>
 	  <para>
 	  Note: If just -l7 is used, then the default values above will be applied.  Light sources
 	  must also be explicitly defined with lumens defined for each source, i.e., default light
@@ -280,7 +281,7 @@
       <varlistentry>
 	<term><option>-p #</option></term>
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>Sets the perspective, in degrees, ranging  0 &lt; = # &lt; 180.</para>
+	  <para>Sets the perspective, in degrees, ranging  0 &lt; = # &lt; 180 .</para>
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
 
@@ -336,7 +337,7 @@
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>sets the ambient light intensity,
 	  as a fraction of the total light in the scene
-	  in the range of 0.0 to 1.0.</para>
+	  in the range of 0.0 to 1.0 .</para>
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
 
@@ -541,7 +542,7 @@
 	  For example, the NTSC aspect ratio can be specified by either
 	  <option>-V1.33</option>
 	  or
-	  <option>-V4:3</option></para>
+	  <option>-V4:3</option> .</para>
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
       <varlistentry>
@@ -643,7 +644,7 @@
   <citerefentry><refentrytitle>rtpp</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
   <citerefentry><refentrytitle>librt</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
   <citerefentry><refentrytitle>ray</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5V</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
-  <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pix</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
+  <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pix</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry></para>
   </refsection>
 
   <refsection xml:id="diagnostics"><title>DIAGNOSTICS</title>

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